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It’s a wonderful feeling
Like floating through air,

But when I come down
My heads still stuck
High in the clouds,

And I don’t know
What’s going on,
I don’t know if
What I’ve done
Are really just my thoughts
And I don’t know
If my thoughts
Have really been put to action

And when I try to blow out my nose
I’m sucking in,

Then I’m back up,

Seeing the tall, towering sky scrappers
From a different view,
Noting the park,
I spot you,

I think what a difference,
You and I are,

I in the sky,
You on the ground,

You’ve probably never been this high,
I don’t think I’ve been that grounded,
For a long, long time.
©2009 ~madam-cicus
:iconmadam-cicus:

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Advice and helpful suggestions would be nice

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:iconbetzieboo:
Im afriad my dear that there is absolutely no advice I can give. This is beautiful.

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If you can just shut up and say one amazing sentance once every ten years you will be a god - Ville Valo
:iconmadam-cicus:
Thanks hun , it really does mean quite a bit when you comment on my work, and with such a niceremark too :3
:iconbetzieboo:
That made me all teary.... :)

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If you can just shut up and say one amazing sentance once every ten years you will be a god - Ville Valo
:iconmadam-cicus:
i meant it, didn't mean to make you teary sorry hun *hugz*
:iconbetzieboo:
i know you meant it thats why it made me teary ^_^ its just very nice....

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If you can just shut up and say one amazing sentance once every ten years you will be a god - Ville Valo
:icontokiko13:
Very good :3

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[I.Chased.A.Rainbow.Until.It.Could.Be.Chased.No.More]
:icontokiko13:
Your Very Welcome ;)
Man, we should hang out sometime soon.

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[I.Chased.A.Rainbow.Until.It.Could.Be.Chased.No.More]
:iconmadam-cicus:
lol we should go to the movies sometimes? yes? mani saw your dad at mcdonalds

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