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Up High by ~madam-cicus:iconmadam-cicus:

Categories Literature > Prose > Fiction > Life Stories


It’s a wonderful feeling
Like floating through air,

But when I come down
My heads still stuck
High in the clouds,

And I don’t know
What’s going on,
I don’t know if
What I’ve done
Are really just my thoughts
And I don’t know
If my thoughts
Have really been put to action

And when I try to blow out my nose
I’m sucking in,

Then I’m back up,

Seeing the tall, towering sky scrappers
From a different view,
Noting the park,
I spot you,

I think what a difference,
You and I are,

I in the sky,
You on the ground,

You’ve probably never been this high,
I don’t think I’ve been that grounded,
For a long, long time.
©2009 ~madam-cicus
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Advice and helpful suggestions would be nice

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:icontokiko13:
~Tokiko13 Sep 6, 2009, 7:06:21 PM
I know! maybe the Stepfather or something? my dad? well, he was probably waiting for Em cause she works there now. its freakin hilarious!! :3

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[I.Chased.A.Rainbow.Until.It.Could.Be.Chased.No.More]
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~madam-cicus Sep 6, 2009, 8:44:53 PM
i know my mum told me and i laughed xD
:icontokiko13:
~Tokiko13 Sep 14, 2009, 5:08:05 PM
i knoww! its just rich :) So, you goin to the Terry Fox run again?

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[I.Chased.A.Rainbow.Until.It.Could.Be.Chased.No.More]
:icontokiko13:
~Tokiko13 Sep 19, 2009, 4:52:39 AM
Is that a yes?? Cause if not, I shall not bother going

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[I.Chased.A.Rainbow.Until.It.Could.Be.Chased.No.More]
:iconmadam-cicus:
~madam-cicus Sep 19, 2009, 8:12:45 AM
probably not. will tell you if that changes though.
:icontokiko13:
~Tokiko13 Sep 20, 2009, 5:03:15 PM
what a jerkk :( fine then, don't ever see me again
jkss Man, so when should we hang out?

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[I.Chased.A.Rainbow.Until.It.Could.Be.Chased.No.More]
:iconmadam-cicus:
~madam-cicus Sep 20, 2009, 5:28:12 PM
Well, again, we could go to a movie sometime maybe? im grounded right now though :{ go on msn more you n00b ;p
:icontokiko13:
~Tokiko13 Sep 20, 2009, 5:59:49 PM
why are you grounded? *tsk tsk*
and i can't go on because it doesn't work :(

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